In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Todays
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, The World has
changing
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because of developing technology in all sectors. One of them is
online
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technology and using
computer
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computers
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or
smart phone
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as electronic devices to help
daily
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activities. They can replace
hardware
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to
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software. For
the
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example, using
internet
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to get some books as free payment. Many people
is
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searching some information
from
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internet
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and
also
they read a newspaper
from
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internet
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. There are some advantages
for
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using
onine
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online
internet
. One of them is paperless. And
then
, many
informations
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information
that we can look at. The
internet
is easy to use, and
then
they can use
in
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it
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online or offline. When online, we can see
many
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information up to date or directly. And offline, we can download some books and save
on
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our computer. After that, we can read for the
next
time.
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online access, we do not need to walk and go out from
home
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to
store
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to buy
some
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books. We can
using
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online
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website
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to buy a book and we can pay at the same time. It is easy and secure. The government has already controlled by making
a
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IT
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Regulations
Regultions
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Regulations
. So, why we
are still worry
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to use
internet
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for online shopping or for
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watching
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watching
movie
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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