the plans below show the layout of a university's sport centre now and how it will look after redevelopment. summorise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

the given
pardigam
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paradigm
illustrate the current plan
of
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for
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university
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the university
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sport
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sports
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centre. Meanwhile dramatical upgradation in
sport
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sports
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facility in advance. according to
future
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the future
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layout,
old
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the old
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main
cetral
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central
building will remain,
gym
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the gym
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will extend towards
East
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the East
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. For dance
classes
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,classes
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a couple of
studio
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studios
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would
be construct
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be constructed
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at
outer
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the outer
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edges of
complex
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the complex
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.
Furthermore
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,Furthermore
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two changing
room
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rooms
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will establish in South East and South West
corner
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corners
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of
building
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the building
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. Whilst old changing
room
will
be remained
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remain
have remained
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.
western
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the western
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outdoor court will convert into
leisure
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a leisure
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pool which would be adjacent
with
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to
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old
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the old
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changing
room
.
moreover
a cafe for refreshment and a
sport
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sports
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shop will
also
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constructed
contructed
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be contructed
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as a joint building of
new
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the new
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changing
room
accordingly
.
Eastern
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The Eastern
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outrdoor
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outdoor
ourt
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out
court
our
will demolish and converted into
sports
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a sports
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hall which opens towards
cafe
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the cafe
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.
future
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the future
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layout of
sport
centre have all advance
requirment
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requirement
meanwhile acquires a large space. As
it
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apply
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can be
see
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seen
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new
sport
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sports
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comples
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complex
complies
going to be fully
indoor
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indoors
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.
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