Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People believe that

students

should study

subjects

which will

needed

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be needed

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in the future

,

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when

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while

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others think that they should study

subjects

what

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that

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they want. In my opinion,

students

should choose those

subjects

that they need for their occupation in future.

In addition

,I want to say that question is neutral.

Firstly

,

for

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apply

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students

should not choose

in

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to

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schedule unnecessary

subjects

.Because,

students

will waste a lot of time

for

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on

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this

and

also

,they cannot concentrate

in

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on

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all

subjects

,and will fall behind with studies.

On the other hand

,their health may deteriorate due to loads.

In addition

,I want to explain examples from my knowledge.

In my

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school’s

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school

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schedule have a lot of unnecessary

subjects

for me.

For instance

,I prefer to study those

subjects

which will useful for

for

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my occupation.It is physics and math.

However

,in

school

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,school

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I

also

learn chemistry and biology. In my view,

students

should have

possibility

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the possibility

a possibility

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to

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of

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choosing

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choose

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subjects

.

Firstly

,it may give

for

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them feelings

freedom

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of freedom

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and independence.

Furthermore

,if

students

will make

yourself

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themselves

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to

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apply

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learn all

subjects

, they may think about education badly.A lot of

students

know which

subjects

will be useful and needed for them.For

this

reason,they can catch up with

studies

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their studies

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.

For example

,in

USA

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the USA

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students

before school education will have been finishing with

first

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their first

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degree of bachelor’s. In conclusion, all university

students

should be able to choose their preferred

subjects

. As well, the feeling of their freedom is crucial.