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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People believe that
students
 should study
subjects
 which will
needed
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be needed
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 in the future
,
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when
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while
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 others think that they should study
subjects
what
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that
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 they want. In my opinion,
students
 should choose those
subjects
 that they need for their occupation in future.
In addition
,I want to say that question is neutral.
Firstly
,
for
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apply
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students
 should not choose
in
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to
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 schedule unnecessary
subjects
.Because,
students
 will waste a lot of time
for
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on
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this
 and
also
,they cannot concentrate
in
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on
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 all
subjects
,and will fall behind with studies.
On the other hand
,their health may deteriorate due to loads.
In addition
,I want to explain examples from my knowledge.
In my
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My
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school’s
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school
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 schedule have a lot of unnecessary
subjects
 for me.
For instance
,I prefer to study those
subjects
 which will useful for
for
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apply
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my occupation.It is physics and math.
However
,in
school
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,school
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 I
also
 learn chemistry and biology. In my view,
students
 should have
possibility
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the possibility
a possibility
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to
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of
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choosing
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choose
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subjects
.
Firstly
,it may give
for
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apply
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them feelings
freedom
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of freedom
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 and independence.
Furthermore
,if
students
 will make
yourself
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themselves
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to
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apply
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learn all
subjects
, they may think about education badly.A lot of
students
 know which
subjects
 will be useful and needed for them.For
this
 reason,they can catch up with
studies
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their studies
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.
For example
,in
USA
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the USA
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students
 before school education will have been finishing with
first
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their first
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 degree of bachelor’s. In conclusion, all university
students
 should be able to choose their preferred
subjects
. As well, the feeling of their freedom is crucial.
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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