In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

Nowadays, the amount of

crime

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is increasing in many countries.

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is one important problem that lots of nations have to face and resolve. In my opinion, the

first

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reason is

economical

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the economical

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situation, the

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reason is technology

developing

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. With technology developing, more and more

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and

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are increased including

crime

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games

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. The

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are made clearly and truthfully. So

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people

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often confuse that it is real or not.

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, SONY company created the game box PS5 which is famous and popular

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around

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the

world

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. There are lots of

crime

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and action

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inside it. At the same time,

crime

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movie

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are

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raising all over the

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. Plenty of young

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like to imitate the role

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of who

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who

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living in

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games

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or

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. They don’t know right from wrong.

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, they often make

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crime

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.

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,

people

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who are living in

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world

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has full of competition and pressure. Some

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just want to get money

through

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by

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treating other

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instead

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of working hard.

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as lots of elders lost their money due to financial

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. To resolve these problems,

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governments should limit youth

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people

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use

some

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of some

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websites or Apps, especially some

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and

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.

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, some western countries have already made

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grade

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for films so that some

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that young

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cannot watch. At the same time, the governments, the schools and parents should educate

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the youth

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together.

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people

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need to know what they can do and what is limited.

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, the government need to create fair economical competition for all the

people

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to avoid financial crimes. In conclusion,

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to avoid

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and

solve

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crime

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is

difficult

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a difficult

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job,

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we should try our best to do it, not only for ourselves

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but

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for

all

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the

world

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in the future.