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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 discovering the
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 of the house or building where they live has become popular among the population of some countries. One of the reasons why individuals want to explore the
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 of their houses is to know about the previous constructions. Sometimes just to know what happened in the past and if the structure of the building is safe.
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, know if there was a land of ancient farms or a catastrophe which left the land weak and could trigger a danger in the future. Another reason that makes people get interested
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 curiosity about existing murders, myths or legends.
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Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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