Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As the world develops
in
a fast pace, sharing Change preposition
at
information
in scientific, academic, and business fields
is
believed to be highly advantageous by most Change the verb form
are
of
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apply
the
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apply
people
, but others oppose to
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apply
this
view,
and are against sharing certain Remove the comma
apply
information
without restrictions. I strongly back up the second
view.
Open access
to all information
can help the progression process in mentioned fields
. We have been seeing the effect of wide information
sharing after the advent of Covid-19 disease. All the papers published during this
pandemic were reachable for
all scientists, Change preposition
to
academic
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academics
people
and businessmen. This
led to innovation
of Covid vaccines as the Add an article
the innovation
scientists
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scientist's
scientists'
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read
red
academic papers, and developed ideas. Correct your spelling
read
This
is when businessmen got informed about vaccines because of these open
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open-access
access
papers and could invest money in drug companies for mass production.
On the opposite side, many people
working in the mentioned fields
, argue that carefree
publication of certain Correct article usage
the carefree
information
is not ethical and can cause plagiarism and idea theft. By
the advent of the Internet Change preposition
With
now a days
it is possible for everybody to make Correct the word
nowadays
an
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information
a piece of information
information
viral. This
means that people
can publish data collected by others in these fields
by their own name.
Some information
could be very dangerous if given to a
wrong person. Not all Correct article usage
the
people
are philanthropists and they tend to misuse information
for evil purposes. For instance
, in academic science certain elements like Lithium are used to make medicine but also
could be used as a toxin in higher doses. Or an
Remove the article
information
a piece of information
information
about how to detect fraud in business life could be a big help for those planning to fool investors.
It could be concluded from above that while open access
to information
could lead to further
findings and progression in science, academic, and business life, Add a hyphen
over-sharing
over sharing
some Add a hyphen
over-sharing
information
could lead to idea theft, and use of information
for non-human aims; therefore
, I believe that access
to certain information
should be restricted.Submitted by amin.pi on
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