The increasing demand for oil and gas has made it necessary to look for these energy sources in remote and untouched natural places. Do you think the advantages of locating oil and gas in these areas outweigh the disadvantages of damaging these places?

The demand

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oil and

gas

is increasing day by day due to the rapid industrial establishment and

the

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over population

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. So, to overcome

this

high demand

of

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oil and

gas

, many countries in the world have searched

new

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sources of

fuel

in the remote

forest

. I think

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the disadvantages of

this

activity

surpass the advantages. In

this

disquisition, I will delineate some pros and cons of

this

work.

Firstly

, through

this

activity

, there have some chances to find out new sources of

fuel

, which is very helpful for human civilization. To clarify, finding out

fuel

might solve the

fuel

scarcity of the world.

Hence

, it is necessary to search

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in

the

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remote places and

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.

Secondly

,

this

searching

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activity

needs many employees.

As a result

, a number of

people

can involve in

this

work, which makes them well in

term

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of income.

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,

Bangladesh

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government is searching new field of

gas

in Sundarban, in which, many local peoples are involved.

Thus

, many

people

believe finding

fuel

is essential for

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society.

However

, searching

operation

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in

the

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beautiful places

have

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some demerits on animals and birds.

To begin

with, when authorities

doing

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their work in the

forest

, they cut down many trees. As

consequence

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, animals and birds of that place

are

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loss

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their shelter and food.

Thus

, many

people

do not support

this

kind of

activity

.

Moreover

,

this

kind of operation

decrease

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quantity

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of CO2

of

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the world because they cut a huge number of trees.

For instance

, a lot number of trees are chopped down from the

forest

area of Sylhet in light of the fact that they found some new

gas

field

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fields

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here, which ultimately

increase

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the amount of CO2.

Hence

, many researchers have tried to

making

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people

aware

on

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this

activity

. To conclude, searching

fuel

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in the

forest

is vital to solve

fuel

shortage and grow up employment, while

this

is deleterious in terms of animal habitation

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and CO2 increase. From my point of view, the advantages of

this

working procedure are much lower than the drawbacks.