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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or
books
 because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this
 statement? In the future, individuals will not purchase
books
 and newspapers owing to they can
access
 to read all sources online without any costs. I personally totally agree with
this
 statement. People will prefer to Read
books
 and any other sources online, due to some reasons.
First
 and foremost, producing eBooks leads to decrease environmental costs. As to manufacturing papers, huge numbers of trees should be eradicated, while trending online reading, aims to survive deforestation all around the world.
As a result
, saving forests cause them to breathe more fresh air and prevents the extinction of various species.
Moreover
, thanks to the wireless internet, individuals have convenient
access
 to read anything they want. It means that they can
access
 all resources from everywhere
such
 as waiting for doctor appointments.
Consequently
, with connection to the internet just by surfing the web with their cellphones or pc,
although
 reading a book or newspaper is less likely to be available everywhere. The other reason for replacing online reading with physical items is owing to be free. When something is free, many more members of society have
access
 to reading. In the past, peoples who read
books
 were from a privileged society,
however
, in the
,
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future
this
 gap between poor and rich will be deleted.
Therefore
, societies will enrich with broad minds. From my perspective, reading online needs just a virtual
space
 to keep
such
 as cloud
space
 on windows. It means that
,
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 we need not depend on allocating some
space
 from our small apartment to keep them. So, it’s the other strong reason for anybody to read online. In conclusion, in the days to come,
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 majority of the population throughout the world reading online will be turned to their priority because of the reduced damage to the environment, easier
access
 to reading from any location, and to all people from all walks. I totally agree
,
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 since the
space
 for maintaining
books
 and other paper items will be cramped in the online
space
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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