Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or disadvantages?

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at the workplace has increased over the period of

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and has become ubiquitous across the globe.

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results in lesser

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spent on relaxation activities. Many folks are in its favour, because of its merits.

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, a large section of the public will highlight its demerits

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. In my essay, the advantages and disadvantages of the phenomenon will be discussed in detail, along with my opinion and a sensible conclusion. Initiating with the benefits in its support, the biggest benefit can be stated is that the nation's economic growth is accelerated. It will be able to have more products and services to export, which will ultimately increase its revenue

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because people are putting in more

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at work and delivering output. To cite an instance, Japan resurrected itself from the devastation of world-war 2 within a short span of

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, due to its citizen's commitment towards rebuilding the country, by working more

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than compared to the average of

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world. It is very common, even today, to observe that Japanese spend more than 12

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at their workplace.

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, superiors view the workforce, who work for longer periods of

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, as hard-working and dedicated, resulting in better chances at promotion.

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, in my own experience, the year in which I received the highest salary hike was the year when my average work

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was the highest in my career. On the contrasting side of

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discussion, people who are against

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notion say that higher working

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make their performance suffer over a period of

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because there is very little

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for leisure activities necessary for energy replenishment. To cite an example, it has been reported across the globe that more and more employees seek mental health consultation, due to the fact that they feel depressed on account of their jobs.

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, the parents will not be able to spend quality family moments with their children, resulting in lesser parental care.

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can spell doom for the children and they may not be able to become upstanding citizens. In conclusion, neither its pros nor its cons can be neglected. In my opinion, one should strike a perfect balance between work-life and relaxation, as both are equally important. Everyone should come forward to mitigate

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issue.