Today, some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of female and male in every subject. Others believe that this is an unacceptable policy. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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, some people

think

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accept

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equal numbers of male and female

students

in every subject in

universities

can bring many changes but

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that others believe that

this

is an unrealistic

policy

. In my point of view,

this

policy

is not possible in the era of 4.0

This

policy

can promote gender equality.

Then

the

number

of boys and

girls

in the class is equal, the boys and

girls

will have the same benefits

such

as the opportunity to get a job or the opportunity to participate in activities.

For instance

, many occupations prioritize hiring men over women

such

as pilot,

IT

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.

Some

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if

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this

policy

is applies

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, the equalization of job opportunities will occur. More

than

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, it can break social taboos about some major. Some people have the prejudice that

this

major is not suitable for that gender,

such

as IT major, people often think that

this

profession is for boys, not for

girls

.

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, there will be

girls

who are talented in

this

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field

fiel

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field

and suffer from social prejudices.

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opposing opinion, it

also

have

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bad

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side. It is unfair because

students

can

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freedom

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freedoom

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freedom

to choose a subject that they like. Having to balance the

number

of male and female

students

will cause some

students

must study

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subjects which are not interested in. Leads to an increase in the

number

of

students

absent from

universities

. More serious, it should

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unemployment

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rate because many

students

will have to study in the wrong field when the school’s quota is enough.

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, in

accountant

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major, there are more

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women

woment

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women

attending than men, so if the

number

were balanced, it would make more

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women

woment

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women

do things they don’t like.

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me

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, I completely agree with

this

opinion.

A

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Universities

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universities

should not

equal

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numbers of male and female

students

in every subject because it can have serious consequences for the future of

students

. To summarize having

an equal numbers

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an equal number

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of males and females in

universities

can bring about a change in theory.

However

, in

reality

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it

create

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negative effects

for

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students

.