Today, some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of female and male in every subject. Others believe that this is an unacceptable policy. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Nowadays
Nowaday
, some people Correct your spelling
Nowadays
think
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accept
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accepting
students
in every subject in universities
can bring many changes but beside
that others believe that Replace the word
besides
this
is an unrealistic policy
. In my point of view, this
policy
is not possible in the era of 4.0
This
policy
can promote gender equality. Then
the number
of boys and girls
in the class is equal, the boys and girls
will have the same benefits such
as the opportunity to get a job or the opportunity to participate in activities. For instance
, many occupations prioritize hiring men over women such
as pilot, IT
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and IT
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If
if
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of
this
policy
is applies
, the equalization of job opportunities will occur. More Change the verb form
is applied
than
, it can break social taboos about some major. Some people have the prejudice that Correct pronoun usage
thatthan
this
major is not suitable for that gender, such
as IT major, people often think that this
profession is for boys, not for girls
. However
, there will be girls
who are talented in this
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field
fiel
and suffer from social prejudices.
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field
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Regarding
also
have
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has
bad
side. It is unfair because Add an article
a bad
students
can Correct your spelling
freedom
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the freedoom
freedoom
to choose a subject that they like. Having to balance the Correct your spelling
freedom
number
of male and female students
will cause some students
must study a
subjects which are not interested in. Leads to an increase in the Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
number
of students
absent from universities
. More serious, it should be increase
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increase
unemployment
rate because many Correct article usage
the unemployment
students
will have to study in the wrong field when the school’s quota is enough. For example
, in accountant
major, there are more Correct article usage
an accountant
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women
woment
attending than men, so if the Correct your spelling
women
number
were balanced, it would make more Correct your spelling
women
woment
do things they don’t like. Correct your spelling
women
From
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Me
me
, I completely agree with Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
opinion. A
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Universities
universities
should not equal
numbers of male and female Add a missing verb
have equal
students
in every subject because it can have serious consequences for the future of students
.
To summarize having an equal numbers
of males and females in Correct the article-noun agreement
an equal number
equal numbers
universities
can bring about a change in theory. However
, in reality
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,reality
create
negative effects Change the verb form
creates
for
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on
students
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