Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the present age, it is debated whether single-sex

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is a more effective schooling practice than

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the end with the conclusion. Convincing arguments can be made that

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and homogenizes the campus.

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only one gender to an institution completely eliminates gender discrimination, empowering the voices of all

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equally. Restricted admittance

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teachers to form a more tightly focused syllabus, by not having to account for some innate differences that come from different genders.

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, a discussion of the female literary character of Jane Eyre is much more useful and educational in an all-girl school.

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, the discussion would be more lively, since more

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would feel involved, creating a positive learning environment for all present.

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, a uniform gender school would better suit its individual

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for a better academic experience.

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carry a socially educational aspect. Single-sex

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are often boarding

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as well, which means that

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often limit their social circle quite drastically, especially prior to the advent of the internet. What

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means is that when a student is ready to go out into the real world, their reduced social skills could not only harm them personally

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but professionally as well.

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jobs almost always require an interview, which would be much more difficult if one were not as cordial.

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, where a student can stand to encounter a normal sampling of their peers.

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provide an indirect, but no less vital part of youth

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. Having considered both views I can on balance assert that both single and

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carry different benefits, but I

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of the opinion that the mixed school practice should stay as the default.