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Some of today's schools insist that all students have their own laptop computer in class to assist in their education. Do you feel that this would be an advantage to studnets' education or would it be an unnecessary complication?

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In recent days, a few
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institutions encourage
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students
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 must have to bring their
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 the lectures, which learning the concepts because it would be efficient for them in their courses.
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, it has some positive views, I am of the opinion that the downside will overtake its upside. My preference is explained with coherent examples in the forthcoming paragraphs. The foremost reason for my notion is that
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 and other electronic devices would become distractions for
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 had allowed
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 personal
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 it might hamper their concentration skills
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, creating a weak and
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inefficient system. Nowadays the youth has inclined and obsessed with
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 types of gadgets.
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 could degrade their memory power,
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 decrease in their academic scores. To add to
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 would feel
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 complex as not all the
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 the same brand of units with similar functionality. The government of Delhi has
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announced
annouced
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 the law ' banning all
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 of phones and
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laptops'
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 in schools, which is an apt example of
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. The schools have a number of
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 coming from various financial backgrounds.
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, while sitting in the same class they may compare themselves with others and
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 an unfair environment.
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, the advantages
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 and will get a plethora of information, which would drastically level up
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 mastery. All in all,
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, some education centres support the belief that
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 should use their computers to help them to assist, I will vote against
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this
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 matter.
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 is to say that it could separate the pupils and build a chaotic atmosphere.
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, there is often room for the
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 to ask questions and queries to their educators, thereby no need for any equipment to check with.

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