Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

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for education should be prohibited. On the one hand,
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would be affected negatively. While it is true that
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brings about convenience to learners by providing sufficient
information
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information
from
internet
pages contain unsightly and explicit contents which would influence immature
students
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may contain some violent and sexual pictures or words. If
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them, in the long term, their values and
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way.
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this
essay does not agree that
students
should not be allowed to use
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as a way of learning since
internet
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helps
students
learn
knowledge
better in many
ways
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To begin
with, using the function of searching on the
internet
,
students
can learn with higher efficiency.
For instance
, they can find out the answers and the analysis via
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when they are failing to answer some questions,
instead
of thinking for a long time by themselves.
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internet
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,
students
are able to learn
knowledge
in many
ways
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as
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and videos, which is more engaging than the way of reading books or hearing words from teachers.
As a result
,
students
are willing to pay more attention to engage in
such
ways
of learning and in turn have a better grasp of the
knowledge
. In conclusion, undoubtedly,
although
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may provide some negative
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to
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, it should not be restricted since it allows
students
to learn faster and understand
knowledge
in more interesting
ways
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ways
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use
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  • accessibility
  • independent learning
  • critical thinking
  • excessive reliance
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  • problem-solving
  • overly dependent
  • diversity
  • perspectives
  • global cultures
  • enriching
  • unrestricted
  • information overload
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