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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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if
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 between having a job or entering
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post-grad studies.
thus
,it is becoming more popular to be faced with many options to chose from.
On the contrary
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 common to find ourselves nowadays in situations with very limited options or without an option at all. that can be due to the fact that it is becoming increasingly popular that
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sometimes
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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