Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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if
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of
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people
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career path.
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between having a job or entering
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post-grad studies.
thus
,it is becoming more popular to be faced with many options to chose from.
On the contrary
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also
common to find ourselves nowadays in situations with very limited options or without an option at all. that can be due to the fact that it is becoming increasingly popular that
people
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about why medical students chose to study medicine ,found that 70% of
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studied medicine solely because their parents made forced them.indeed we
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sometimes
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sometimes
find ourselves with only
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choice. In conclusion, it is believed by many that we live in a world with too many
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true and common to be faced with multiple
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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