In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Most of the

workers

used to go to their

office

in

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daily

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basis.

However

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the advancement of technology

such

as

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the increase

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increase

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usage of computers and any other devices

which

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apply

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connected to the internet

,

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enables

the

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workers

to do their assignments from

home

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opinions

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, there are some benefits and drawbacks of working from

home

. On the one hand,

employee

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an employee

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who has done their work from their

home

tended to have mental problems regarding social interaction. People could suffer cabin fever which

make

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them feel restless and irritable because they have been indoors in one place for too long. With the facilities available almost for everything, it allowed us not to leave the house at all

furthermore

it would minimize interaction between

human

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.

On the other hand

,

employee

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the employee

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could utilise their

time

and

money

more effectively without decreasing their productivity. The

workers

have to spare several hours of their

time

every day just to go to their

office

, they need to consider some factors which

affects

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the length of the trip to the

office

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for instance

the distance and traffic between their

home

to the

work place

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workplace

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.

Time

spent by the

workers

commuted

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to their

office

, could be used to do some other activities related to work or personal gain.

Beside

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the times,

other

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consideration is

money

, people have to spend some

money

to pay fares or gas

fee

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whether they used public

and

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personal transport. Many hindrances could be eliminated, if the

workers

allowed

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to do their assignments from

home

, so they could become prolific. In

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conclusion

conlusion

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conclusion

, people who worked from

home

could utilize either their

time

and

money

more wisely,

however

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there are side effects regarding mental issues caused by the lack of social interactions.