Machines have replaced physical work in many industries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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machines

has

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humans

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physical work in different areas. I think

benefits

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are higher than

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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for the

companies

because reduce human errors,

sickness

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and sickness

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and reduce the

cost

for different

companies

.

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with,

companies

have

choose

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machines

to do certain

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because they are

more

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apply

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faster, less expensive and efficient. Different

machines

can

do

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the process

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process

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processes

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in

better

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a better

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way

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than

humans

.

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, Japan for food production use

machines

for most part

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of the process which make the

companies

have

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reduce

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their spending.

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reason technology is taking over

from

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humans

.

Secondly

, people doing the same work with repetitive movements usually

gets

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injuries which can

be prevent

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with incorporate other

equipments

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equipment

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. Injuries generally

cost

enormous amounts of money

for

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companies

.

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, Finland since

incorporated

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machines

for doing repetitive movements

on

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in

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companies

have

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reduce

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the

cost

on

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50

percent

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. For

this

is important

companies

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for companies

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have that as

consideration

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a consideration

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when they are choosing between

humans

and

machines

. In conclusion,

evolution

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the evolution

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of technology

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have

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tohave

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make

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made

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change

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a change

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in our industry which

make

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making

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less use of human activity in different jobs change

for

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machines

.

This

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essay we discussed the main advantages

for

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incorporating

machines

such

as

prevent

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preventing

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lesion

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,

reduce

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reducing

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cost

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and

decrease

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humans

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human

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errors.