You were hurt in a small accident in a store last week. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter: introduce yourself describe what happened say what action you would like the manager to take

Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your attention an incident that occurred in your supermarket
last
weekend. I would
also
like to make some suggestions so that
such
a thing will never happen. My name is john and I have been a loyal customer of your smart ever since I moved to
this
area 8 years ago.
Although
your store is slightly
further
from my home than IGA, I always made a round trip because of your quality fresh products and excellent customer service. On
this
occasion,
however
, I suffered an unfortunate accident, I believe, to the negligence of the floor staff. As I was waking to check out my groceries, I stepped on the spilt water and fell down, spraining my wrist in the process. while I understand the store gets busy sometimes, falls could be avoided if ground staff are quicker to act. so that
therefore
I would request you to review the policies around the spillages, and, make sure that staff should stand guard against the spilt liquid until it is wiped off. Hope you will consider
this
into account in order to avoid
further
mishaps. Yours Faithfully Santhosh
Submitted by santhoshvarunkumar on

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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