The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The two figures
shows
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the current site of
southwest
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airport
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and
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future of it after the level-up plan. Overall, there is a main
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in the gate
part
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located in the north and other small improvements in the middle of the
airport
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. The largest change will take place in the northern
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, which now owns 8 gates and a walkway. The area of
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part
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, in the shape of
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, seems
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quiet
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small compared with the whole
airport
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. After development, the gate
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will
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into
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shape, with totally
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gates. The walkway will
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be modernized into a long sky train, sending tourists directly to the entrance of
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body of the
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. The plan told us that some details in the main body of the
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be renovated. Some economic or convenient facilities like shops and bad drop will be added in the departure
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, located in the west of
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airport
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. Cafe and ATM will offer service to tourists in the arrival
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, which is
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to the departure
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. Car hiring service will be obtained easily after upgrades
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year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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