You were hurt in a small accident in a store last week. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter: introduce yourself describe what happened say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing to bring to your attention an incident that occurred at your supermarket
last
weekend. I would also
like to give some suggestions so that such
a thing will not repeat again.
My name is John and I have been a loyal customer of your smart at bridge road ever since I moved to this
area 8 years ago. Although
your store is slightly further
from my home than IGA. I always made a round trip because of your quality fresh products and excellent customer service.
On this
occasion, however
, I suffered an unfortunate accident, I believe, due to the negligence of the shop floor staff. As I was walking to check out my groceries, I slipped on the split water and fell down, spraying my wrist in the process.
while I understand the store gets busy sometimes, fall could have been avoided if the staff was quick to act. So therefore
I would request you to review policies around spillages, and, make sure that staff should stand guard against the split water until it is wiped out.
I hope you will take this
into account in order to avoid further
mishaps.
Yours faithfully
JohnSubmitted by santhoshvarunkumar on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite