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The given line graph illustrates the
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of births and deaths that occurred and will be during two centuries from 1901 to 2101 in New Zealand. Overall, it is clearly shown that the Death rate was low at the beginning of the period and gradually increased by the middle of the given time and it is predicted to soar dramatically up,
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remain stable. While the Birth rate was actually higher in comparison with the Death rate and experienced a
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of fluctuations,
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by the end of the period it is likely to decrease slowly. In 1901, the death
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was almost ten
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and it had continued increasing insensibly during the
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100 years before it had a drastic rise. In the following years, to be more precisely in 2060, it will reach its peak, which is about sixty
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deaths in a year, and remain the same until the twenty-
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century. Whilst, In the early nineteen-century
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of ,births were approximately 20
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and was not stable til the 2000s and reached its highest index in 1961, with more than 64
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births a year.
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there was decay in 1981 about half a hundred
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,
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soared up again during the following decade. From the
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,millennium ut stayed stable, so it is expected to have a slow decrease til 2101.
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