Nowadays, many children have trouble paying attention in class or concentrating on their school work. Why is this happening? How can this problem be solved?
Nowadays, a large number of children suffer from taking care of their lessons in class and concentrating on other
school
activities at school
. In this
essay, I will discuss why is this
happening and how can address and create a sensible solution.
Today, a lot of children, because of
we are in the technological era, are having a technological device. Change preposition
apply
Although
,
technology is one of the most crucial things in human life, there are many problems caused Remove the comma
apply
using
Change preposition
by using
them
Change the pronoun
their
hours
. Change preposition
for hours
As a result
of this
situation is that
Correct determiner usage
a
lacks
Correct subject-verb agreement
lack
of
paying attention as well as insufficiencies Remove the preposition
apply
of
concentrating on various Change preposition
in
school
works. To exemplify, according to a study conducted by James John, the likelihood is that the
probability of Correct article usage
apply
have
Change the verb form
having
a
poor concentration of those Correct article usage
apply
of
using technological tools phones, tablets etc. many hours far Change preposition
apply
more
higher than other onesChange the word
apply
have
. Unnecessary verb
apply
Thus
, using this devices
in class and at Change the determiner
this device
these devices
school
can give rise to miscellaneous issues.
With regard to solution
, it is a conspicuous fact thatCorrect article usage
a solution
,
parents and Remove the comma
apply
schools
boards have to tackle Change the noun form
school
this
problem with
restricting the usage of phones in classes. If many people want to solve Change preposition
by
this
, they have to embrace an
idea that the less using technological distractions, the more concentration on lessons. Correct article usage
the
For example
, Big Mayor Primary School
situated in London is one of the most important examples in respect of solution. There is 5
% increase in their Correct article usage
a 5
students
GPAs in Change noun form
student's
students'
a
following term with Change the article
the
this
limiting rule. Therefore
, confining the using
of phones in a certain place can try to deal with Replace the word
use
this
type of problem.
To conclude, there are many distractions in classes as interrupting
students' Wrong verb form
interrupt
attentions
and Fix the agreement mistake
attention
this
might be solved with an
idea of restricting these devices at schools and in classes.Correct article usage
the
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