Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Some groups of people are of the same

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about educating

boys

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and

girls

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in unconnected

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;

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, the rest of the people believe that taking part in mixed

schools

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has a more positive effect on

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and

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. As far as I am concerned, the

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group

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has a better point due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. The

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group

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that I want to discuss, has an extremist point of

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. In Some countries due to religious reasons, their government has to separate young

children

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from each other at

schools

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. The traces of

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deviation can be found in society.

Children

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at their youngest age have to learn personal activities and friendly behaviour from their friends. When they are separated, the social skills that they could learn

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doomed to failure in the future. The

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second

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group

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, according to the results of some research, has a proper

view

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. Youngest

children

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need to learn social skills with no gender classification. They can use extracurricular activities

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as art classes and exercises together. Mixed

schools

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perform a key role in the future of the society of that country where they have the same idea. As a matter of fact, if I want to give the

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point of

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I would say I am of the same

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about the fact that the youngest

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benefit more from attending mixed

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. I was in a society

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boys

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and

girls

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must be separated due to religious reasons in different

schools

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. That separation makes a contribution to the destructive effects of sexuality. If we pay attention to

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most countries with

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second

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opinion

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, there are better results in terms of behaviour for

youngesters

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youngsters

that were never separated when they were kids. In conclusion, there were two groups of people with two different points of

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about separating

boys

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and

girls

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from each other at

schools

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. The

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second

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group

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considered that

youngesters

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youngsters

benefit more from sitting in mixed

schools

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.

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, my solid

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is so close to the

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second

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group

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which was not extremist at all.