IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5.5

some people think that activities done in person's free time should be planned, while others disagree. Discus both sides and give your opinion.

#people #activities #person #time #discus
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
These days, it is very essential to spare some hours from your busy work routine and do some beneficial
activities
Use synonyms
 during that
time
Use synonyms
. Some believe that a person should plan his
activities
Use synonyms
 to be done in his free
time
Use synonyms
, while others think that planning is not necessary. In
this
Linking Words
 essay, we will discuss why it is needed to plan your off-work
activities
Use synonyms
. If we plan our free
time
Use synonyms
activities
Use synonyms
, we can set a certain amount of
time
Use synonyms
 for
a particular tasks
Correct the article-noun agreement
a particular task
particular tasks
show examples
 and we can squeeze in different hobbies in a short span.
For instance
Linking Words
, if one gets 3 hours of free
time
Use synonyms
 in the evening, one can give 1 hour to three different
activities
Use synonyms
.Planning makes our tasks easy, while it takes off the pressure of
time
Use synonyms
 management and gives us a sense of discipline.
On the contrary
Linking Words
, if the
activities
Use synonyms
 people do in their free
time
Use synonyms
 are unplanned, they will not be able to give the required
time
Use synonyms
 to the particular activity.Meanwhile,
time
Use synonyms
 management will be quite difficult for them and they can
also
Linking Words
 become lazy.
In addition
Linking Words
 to that, they can miss out on some important tasks. Taking some
time
Use synonyms
 off work, and planning that
time
Use synonyms
 is a basic requirement for living a good and disciplined life. Planning free
time
Use synonyms
 is going to give you relief from managing all
activities
Use synonyms
 in a short period of
time
Use synonyms
; whereas, not planning them can make you lazy and that
time
Use synonyms
 can get wasted. In my opinion, a person can consider planning only those
activities
Use synonyms
 which he prefers over others.
Submitted by anniezafar3 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: