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These days, more father's stay at home and take of their children, and mother's go to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you believe that this a positive or negative development?

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In
this
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 contemporary world,
large
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a large
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 number of fathers look after their children meanwhile, mothers are working and all of
the
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 financial situations are being covered by them. In my opinion,
this
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 depends on
men
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's indolence
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besides
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another efficient could be a promotion of women
instead
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 of
men
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 at
work
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. According to evidence,
that is
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 an inappropriate revolution among humanity.
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, I will try to discuss and highlight both of them. Today's fathers are significantly fashionable because, some years ago, they were
endeavoring
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 to save money for taking care of their
family
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families
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.
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, erstwhile and actual cases have huge discrepancies.
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, in the past, both
of
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obligations
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the obligations
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men
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 and females were looking after their children. They had respect and appreciation
each
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for each
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 other
in addition
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,
life
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 was great
also
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 everyone had a place in
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as
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male
and
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or
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 female.
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,
present
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in present
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days
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day
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, laziness is coming more common among males.
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, duties have been altering between them
as a result
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, women are becoming
head
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heads
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 of families. There are lots of reasons for
this
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 issue and
on
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in
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 the
first
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 stage,
majority
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the majority
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 of women are able to get a promotion so easy due to their intelligence.
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, males are full-time dad
either
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housekeeper
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housekeepers
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in
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at
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 that time.
Men
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 can not do anything with freedom, their own money or ideas
besides
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 they might not be enough money for happening something. As an impact, dysfunctional families and broken homes may
be appeared
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 between family members. Everybody should know their stage in
life
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. In conclusion, mothers' function at
work
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it
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is not needless
instead
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 of
them
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fathers should
work
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 for their immediate family. Of course, jobs are not rejected for females it is their own
decisions
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. In
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principle
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principal
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principle
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,
men
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 have to find their place in
life
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,
work
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 and family.

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