Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make the staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Discuss both news and give your opinion.

Many
employers
give importance to their employee's health which can result in their
productivity
. As a part of employee welfare
initiatives
,
employers
provide subsidies for gym and sports club membership to their
employees
. Whereas some
employers
think that there is not much advantage in doing so.
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also
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my opinion on
this
. On one hand, some
employers
believe that providing subsidies
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recreation club membership doesn't generate any added value for the
company
. From a monetary point of view,
this
brings
additional
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the additional
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cost
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costs
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to the
company
. They
also
think that
employees
spend more time in the gym and sports clubs than in the office which could result in the
productivity
of the
employees
.
For instance
,
employees
can misuse the facilities provided by the
company
by not realising the idea behind these
initiatives
.
On the other hand
, companies
who
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support their
employees
with recreation club membership consider
employees
as their backbone and do different types of
initiatives
for the welfare of
employees
. The health of
employees
is considered
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the
productivity
and the success of the
company
.
for instance
, Companies like Google and Microsoft have introduced
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gym facilities in their office that
employees
can utilise during their break time.
This
initiative resulted in high
productivity
compared to the earlier periods. I my opinion, Subsidies to recreation clubs are a good initiative,
this
helps the employee to gain physical fitness and
also
help
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to release mental pressure on their work. To conclude,
employers
need to think from a broader perspective about the advantage that these types of
initiatives
can bring to the business.
Likewise
,
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these
initiatives
might look like an overhead to business,
however
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this
will give mileage from
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point of view.
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