Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make the staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Discuss both news and give your opinion.

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give importance to their employee's health which can result in their

productivity

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. As a part of employee welfare

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,

employers

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provide subsidies for gym and sports club membership to their

employees

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. Whereas some

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think that there is not much advantage in doing so.

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essay discusses both views and

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share

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my opinion on

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. On one hand, some

employers

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believe that providing subsidies

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recreation club membership doesn't generate any added value for the

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. From a monetary point of view,

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brings

additional

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cost

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to the

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. They

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think that

employees

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spend more time in the gym and sports clubs than in the office which could result in the

productivity

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of the

employees

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.

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,

employees

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can misuse the facilities provided by the

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by not realising the idea behind these

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.

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, companies

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support their

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with recreation club membership consider

employees

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as their backbone and do different types of

initiatives

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for the welfare of

employees

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. The health of

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is considered

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key

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the

productivity

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and the success of the

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.

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, Companies like Google and Microsoft have introduced

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gym facilities in their office that

employees

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can utilise during their break time.

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initiative resulted in high

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compared to the earlier periods. I my opinion, Subsidies to recreation clubs are a good initiative,

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helps the employee to gain physical fitness and

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help

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to release mental pressure on their work. To conclude,

employers

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need to think from a broader perspective about the advantage that these types of

initiatives

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can bring to the business.

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,

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initially

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these

initiatives

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might look like an overhead to business,

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however

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will give mileage from

long-term

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a long-term

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point of view.