Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and result in global warming. Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How this problem can be solved?

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, with the advancement of industries, the amount of greenhouses is dramatically increased. Due to

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fact, global warming is going higher day by day. In my point of view, with the cooperation between the governments and

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,

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issue will be diminished in the future. I will discuss my solutions in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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with, global warming is one of the major problems that

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conflict with. Because it causes a lot of dreadful impacts on

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the environment

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, with

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phenomenon,

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the climate

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of many regions

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changed. To clarify, when the temperature of

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rise, the weather

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many areas

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affected.

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, it causes heavy rain or storm in one place

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or causes the weather

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another place

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dryer.

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, the melting process of

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in

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the polar

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is changed. Actually, the rate of melting is going up.

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,

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the level

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of the oceans

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going higher. So, the cities that

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near the oceans are destroyed.

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, it is a noticeable threat for some

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.

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phenomenon is so harmful.

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, with can reduce it with some

approach

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, fuels like oil, play a vital role in increasing

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apply

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global warming. So, they can

replaced

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by new energies

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as hydrogen, solar, and alternative methods which have no harmful effect on climate.

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, the governments can improve

the

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apply

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public transportation. Because At

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time, the percentage of using personal cars is increased. Due to

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issue, the emission of cars contains an amount of carbon dioxide which leads the temperature of weather

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goes

higher.

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, with the advancement of public transport, the number of

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cars

are

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decreased. So, the amount of CO2 in

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

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feel

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feels

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. To conclude my essay, the production of

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greenhouses

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green houses

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greenhouses

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such

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as CO2 has a negative impact on global warming.

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, it has a lot of disadvantages for

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the environment

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and

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.

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, with some solutions

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as upgraded transportation or using recycled energy, we can eliminate those harmful consequences.