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It is often thought that the increase in Juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media do you think that this is the main cause of Juvenile tribe what solution can you offer to deal with this situation

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transportations
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 used to travel and work between 1960 and 2000. Overall, in 2000,
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 was the majority of the transport modes in
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, while
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 preferred
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 in 1960. In detail,
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 and
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 had the same trend which was dropping between 1960 and 2000, from 35% to 10% and from 25% to 5% respectively. Whereas the percentage of
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tended to use
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 was rising 30% from 1960 to 2000, from 5% to 35%.
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 similar number of people had still chosen
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 to transport to anywhere between 1960 and 2000, accounting for around 20%. There were 3 categories in 1906 and 2000,
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changed
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, decreased
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% and 15% and increased
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% respectively. While , in 1980, all transportation had the same amount of
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, at around 20
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