You wish to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to the university. In your letter you should ask about: the accommodation and fees possible scholarships and the qualifications required for acceptance.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Steev.I am living in India and recently completed my secondary education.I am writing

this

letter to seek clarification regarding my education at your institution.

Firstly

,I like to know about the fee structure and the initial down payment.Please let me know if the payment has to be done by cash or credit card.

Moreover

,I require the details of my stay during my studies.

Also

,I like to know about the facilities in the hostel.

Further

,I have scored ninety per cent of marks in my academics and passed with high grades.Are there any scholarships available to support my studies?It would be a great help if any funds were allocated to me during my tenure. To add ,Let me know the criteria required to accept my application.I will submit my application as soon as I receive a response from you.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Steev

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7 paragraphs

152 words

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Accommodation
Fees
Tuition
Scholarships
Qualifications
Acceptance
International students
Course
Payment plans
Facilities
Eligibility
Enquiry
Dormitories
Language proficiency
Standardized tests
Campus
Inquire
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