some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern times, the issue of

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has become highly controversial. there are those who say that graduation is the best way for getting a

job

,

however

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others

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believe

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belive

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believe

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that after the primary

level

is the best for searching a

job

. in

this

essay

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i

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will explain both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion. Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why people

fell

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that after the university

level

or college

level

it is

a

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best

time

for making a good career. one of the prime reasons is

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for a

qualityfull

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quality full

job

. some

student

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students

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and people

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believe

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belive

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believe

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that if they complete their education

then

they easily manage any demandable work

,

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apply

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because they already get a certificate for

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their

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qualification

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. Another

reasons

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is

salfe

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safe

self

employment,

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because

beacuse

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because

much student

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many students

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also

their aim is make

a

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own business, for

this

thinking

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they wait for the right

time

. they think after

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graduation

gradution

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graduation

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is best for the

start

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their plan and make their career. Despite the argument, there is

also

case

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a case

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for the idea that after school

level

searching

a

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for a

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job

.

in

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this

these

thise

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are so many

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to make mistake,

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because

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because

after the academy primary

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nobody

get

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much experience

for

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any

job

. so easily they create any problem. in

this

stage

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there was no idea about

future

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,

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because

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because

their thinking

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is not much advance. if they make any

rong

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wrong

dicision

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decision

on

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this

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after that in their full life they suffer

this

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from this

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problem. in conclusion,

i

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would like to say that,

job

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a job

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and career must important

part

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parts

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for

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of

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everyone

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life, but need to make a good decision for that when they are fully

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prepared

perpared

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prepared

for that.