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Band 6.5

Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

Dear Concern, Hope you are doing well today, I am writing
this
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 letter to inform you about the mishap
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happened
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that happend
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happend
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happened
with
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to
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 me
last
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 night. In
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fact
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fact
fect
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,fect
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 I
have
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lost my luggage
bag
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 at the London
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airport
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air port
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airport
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. Unfortunately, I was in a hurry because I had to catch up with my manager to reach
at
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our
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important
imporant
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important
 business meeting. After getting off the plane, I rushed towards passport control, In the
mean while
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meanwhile
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 I did not
noticed
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notice
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 that I forgot to collect my
bag
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 from
baggage
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the baggage
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 belt.
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However
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 it
brought
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was brought
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into
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to
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 my notice when I reached
to
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my hotel room. Anyhow, I can describe
about
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my
bag
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 to you
that
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what
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 how it looks like and what
are
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apply
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the items are
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inside
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in side
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inside
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 so that you may able to find it.
First
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 of
all
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,all
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 it is
in
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apply
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10 inches in width and 20 inches in
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height
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hight
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height
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 and it is in blue colour.
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Secondly
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 there are four new
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T-shirts
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T shirts
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T-shirts
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 and 2
pair
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 of
pents
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pants
, and
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black
balck
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black
 formal shoes I kept inside the
bag
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. Kindly check the airport
camras
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cameras
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from
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for
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security
securtiy
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security
inchage
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in charge
 of
luggage
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the luggage
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 belt.It will be
appriated
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appreciated
 if you can assist me
on
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in
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 finding my luggage
bag
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 as soon as possible.
Your
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Yours
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 sincerely, John King

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unfortunate incident
  • Flight details
  • Distraction
  • Valuable possessions
  • Sentimental value
  • Lost and found procedure
  • Safe return
  • Compensation
  • Assistance
  • Gratitude
  • Follow-up
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