Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem
Dear Concern,
Hope you are doing well today, I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the mishap Correct your spelling
happened
Correct pronoun usage
that happend
happend
Correct your spelling
happened
with
me Change preposition
to
last
night. In Correct your spelling
fact
Correct your spelling
fact
fect
I Add a comma
,fect
have
lost my luggage Unnecessary verb
apply
bag
at the London Correct your spelling
airport
air port
.
Unfortunately, I was in a hurry because I had to catch up with my manager to reach Correct your spelling
airport
at
our Remove the preposition
apply
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important
imporant
business meeting. After getting off the plane, I rushed towards passport control, In the Correct your spelling
important
mean while
I did not Correct your spelling
meanwhile
noticed
that I forgot to collect my Change the verb form
notice
bag
from baggage
belt. Correct article usage
the baggage
However
it Add a comma
,However
brought
Add a missing verb
was brought
into
my notice when I reached Change preposition
to
to
my hotel room.
Anyhow, I can describe Change preposition
apply
about
my Remove the preposition
apply
bag
to you that
how it looks like and what Correct word choice
what
are
the items are Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct your spelling
inside
in side
so that you may able to find it. Correct your spelling
inside
First
of all
it is Add a comma
,all
in
10 inches in width and 20 inches in Change preposition
apply
Correct your spelling
height
hight
and it is in blue colour. Correct your spelling
height
Secondly
there are four new Add a comma
,Secondly
Add a hyphen
T-shirts
T shirts
and 2 Add a hyphen
T-shirts
pair
of Fix the agreement mistake
pairs
pents
, and Correct your spelling
pants
Correct your spelling
black
balck
formal shoes I kept inside the Correct your spelling
black
bag
.
Kindly check the airport camras
and ask Correct your spelling
cameras
from
Change preposition
for
Correct your spelling
security
securtiy
Correct your spelling
security
inchage
of Correct your spelling
in charge
luggage
belt.It will be Correct article usage
the luggage
appriated
if you can assist me Correct your spelling
appreciated
on
finding my luggage Change preposition
in
bag
as soon as possible.
Your
sincerely,
John KingCorrect the word
Yours
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