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If you could plan the perfect day to spend with your close friends, where would you go and why?

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There’s a lake with an
island
 in the middle of it north of our
town
, and I would go there for the perfect
day
, an
all
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day
 camp out.
It’s
 a great
place
 to go swimming because
it’s
 deep and cool.
It’s
 a great
place
 to have a cookout or picnic because
it’s
 far away from the rest of humanity and we don’t have to worry about being noisy to our
neighbors
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. And
it’s
 far away from the
light
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lights
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 of houses and the
town
, so
it’s
 a perfect
place
 to go to sleep under the
stars
. The perfect
day
 for me would be an overnight camp out to that
island
. The first reason why I would plan a perfect
day
 on that
island
 is because
it’s
 a great
place
 to go swimming with my friends. The lake is nice and deep around where the
island
 is. There’s a
place
 where we can dive right in off of a tire swing we put there. The water is cool and we all have a great time splashing around and playing in the water. We always have a great time when we go out there and go for a long swim around that
island
. The second reason a campout there would be a perfect
day
 is that we could have as big a
party
we
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as we
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 want without anyone being bothered. We could play our music loudly and dance and sing and no one would threaten to call the police on us. We could eat all the food we brought
while
 we chatted loudly with ourselves and no one we would know would try to crash the
party
. It would just be me, my friends, some great music, and enough food to
last
 us until we left the following morning. That would make it a perfect
day
,
that
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where
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 we could eat and
party
 without worrying about the
neighbors
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. The
last
 reason I would consider a campout
at
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 that
island
 to be perfect would be that we could fall asleep looking at the
stars
. In the
town
 where we live, we could never have seen the
stars
 because there were so many houses with lights on. We would
also
 only sleep inside with our parents nearby, so there was no sense of adventure. But on the
island
, with the
town
 so far away, we can see the night sky clearly. We can all gather together, look at the
stars
 and tell each other our wishes and other personal worries to each other as we drift into sleep. The
stars
 always look beautiful and we feel a sense of peace as we stare up at them from our small
island
. So that
island
 in the middle of the lake would be where we would spend our perfect
day
.
It’s
 a great
place
 to swim because
it’s
 deep,
cool
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and cool
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, and we can dive in without getting hurt.
It’s
 a great
place
 to have a
party
 and
cookout
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cook out
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 because no one is there to threaten to call the cops or to crash the
party
.
It’s
also
 a great
place
 to camp because we can see the
stars
 at night, something we could never do at home. That’s why a
day
 on that
island
 would be a perfect
day
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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