Thanks to globalization societies are becoming more and more alike. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Communities are getting more similar day by day

as a result

of globalization. Even some societies are afraid of not protecting their heritage. I

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totally

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that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. Young people’s criticized and unwilling attitudes to traditions

as well as

their similar lifestyles are the reasons for

this

outcome.

Firstly

, the

elder

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population of the world is against traditional things, and every possible time they express their supporting ideas about the beauty of globalization.

For example

, two days ago the concert of the Camanche composer, he is the

last

one of

this

old instrument, was nearly empty because of another international pop star’s concert. Sadly, the community may choose the global one but the traditional artists will disappear lack of demand.

Therefore

, the elder’s choices will affect badly the transfer of culture to the future.

Secondly

, the public has liked to have the same daily routine since recently and different styles of our culture

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begun to wipe out somehow.

For instance

,

while

some families used to eat Turkish borek

at

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the

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breakfast, others used to eat Turkish omelettes. The demand for

this

kind of breakfast is diminishing now

as a consequence

of the growing popularity of croissants worldwide. For that reason, the general

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lifestyle

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forgetting old habits. To summarize, the decisions of certain age groups in the public and the close daily routine of some folk will affect seriously cultural heritage. Because people like all the same things around the world will

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cause the disappearance of customs. It is predicted that the customs sustainability depends on the young age group’s choice and a similar lifestyle can cause

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the loss of

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old routines.