There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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letter which relates to the issue that I have been facing for the
last
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two weeks: the
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transportation system's reliability.
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, I cannot reach my destination on time, and sometimes,
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services completely shut down without notice. In that case, I need to spend extra money to take help from a public vehicle
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as uber and many more to reach my place. These problems affect my daily routine as I don't know about
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routes because the
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sometimes arrives early or gets delayed. So I am always unsure about the exact time of the
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. It
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unbalanced my budget for the whole month. As an international student, I have to manage all the expenses by myself. But my budget has been out of control for the past few weeks because of the
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service problem. I am requesting you contact the
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transportation system and ask them why it takes so much time to resolve
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issue. So that everything returns to normal and no one faces
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a problem again. Your Sincerely, Satwinder Singh
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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