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Is mental strength important for success or is it more important to be strong and fit for success in sports? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#strength #success #sports
It is thought by some that
psychology
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 strength is crucial for getting victory while others believe that physical fitness provides high
chances
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to
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of
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 get success in
sports
.
This
 essay will discuss both
the
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opinions along with my own viewpoint. To commence with, mental strength plays a vital role in
sports
 as winning and losing is quite common in games and if a
person
 is losing the
game
 he should be mentally strong to face his failure so that he can be able to play in other competition. To exemplify, a
person
participated
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 in
swimming
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a swimming
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 competition
he
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lose his
race
 only with
the
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 gap of 2 seconds but he has a mindset of victory and again he participated in his
race
 and won the
race
.
Thus
, it shows that
mental
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 stability of an individual really matters. On the paradoxical side,
physical
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the physical
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 fitness of people in
sports
 is important as it is the major factor which contributes
in
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 the field of
sports
. A
person
 with
unhealthy
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an unhealthy
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 weight has zero chances to play
in
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any
sports
 and if he
try
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 to take part in his
game
 he will definitely
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lose
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loose
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lose
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 it.
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, in
800
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an 800
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 m
race
 a
person
 with
healthy
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a healthy
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 weight, endurance, speed and strength can only win as
as
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compared to the other weak players.
Besides
this
, only players who are strong and
has
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fit
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a fit
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 body are allowed to play at international games, a
person
have
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 to
fulfill
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 all the requirements which are made by the
sports
.
Hence
, it proves that an athlete should be powerful and healthy to win or participate in any
game
. To conclude,
although
 both mental stability and physical fitness of a
person
is
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are
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 necessary to get triumph in any competition related to
sports
 but being
psychological
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 prepared for the
game
 is not
only
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the only
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 factor
contributes
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that contributes
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in
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 the victory of an athlete.
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