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I am writing to inquire about some information regarding immigration to Canada.
me
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My
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 and wife will be having our
first
 child
this
 coming autumn In fact, I have been considering immigrating to Canada for quite some time and I am wondering if my qualifications make me eligible to apply. I have enclosed my resume with my personal details as well as a bank statement which can prove my financial status and the certificate of my English proficiency. I got to know Mr Chalk when I was the teacher of the class majoring in English literature and he was one of the students in
this
 class. His brilliant performances on several occasions
such
 as group discussions and opening debates really took me by great surprise. Never had I met a Chinese student speaking English so fluently and accurately.
Besides
, his insights into British literature as a whole make me wondering his
first
-class learning ability
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