In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, some

citizens

think that the government should spend enormous sums of

money

on constructing new

railway

lines

for express trains between cities. While some others claim that sums of

money

should be spent on improving existing public

transport

. I agree that the government should spend

money

on the new

railway

lines

, but I

also

think that it is necessary to improve existing

transport

.

Firstly

, each country should take a look at the

citizens

' needs to know what they prefer. People would always prefer new

railway

lines

for trains because it will be easier for them to travel to work, schools, etc. But if the existing public

transports'

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quality does not meet the

citizens

' satisfaction

then

it would be more necessary

to

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begin with improving the facilities than trying to construct new ones.

Secondly

, the authorities have to consider

about

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financial issues to select the most suitable plan. On the one hand, developed and developing countries will have more

money

to construct new

railway

lines

to satisfy people's requirements.

On the other hand

, undeveloped countries with unstable financial conditions should concentrate on improving the existing

transport

. In conclusion, either spending a big amount of

money

on constructing new

railway

lines

for the express trains between cities or using that amount of

money

to improve the existing

transport

is necessary. But how to choose the perfect solution totally depends on what the

citizens

need and the economic situation of each country.