Some people think sports are important for society.While others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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healthier.There are different types of
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activities
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people
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lost wealth.
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type of
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without working,they can not
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for habit.Meanwhile,when
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want to do exercise,they can do
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work or boring time.I think.
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important. In conclusion,I
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physical activity is an integral part of the modern lifestyle my firm conviction is that it should be considered
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a leisure activity.
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