Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which type of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

Retirement

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age

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is an

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when every working individual takes a break from a job and gets paid for the services they have done for their

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. Some sociologists believe that having a fixed

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age

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for everybody irrespective of their occupation is unfair, and certain

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should be allowed to take early

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. I completely agree with

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argument and I will indicate my view with examples.

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with, people tend to become weak as they grow older. Different occupations demand different kinds of skills. Certain

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need physical energy to perform their duties.

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physical power and stamina reduce with old

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. While other occupations like office work demand less physical energy.

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,

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whose endeavour demands more physical strength need to be given early pullout.

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can be illustrated by the

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in the coal mines whose effort demands strength and stamina which deteriorates as they grow older.

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,

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sitting in a library do not need to have much physical strength.

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, people who have served a lot for a

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for a longer duration could be given early evacuation. Certain

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who have dedicated most of their life working for a community should be allowed to reap the benefits of

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at an early

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.

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, my father started working for a

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in India at the

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of 20. He was allowed to take early

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by considering the tenure of his work in the

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. In conclusion, having a common

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age

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for all kinds of

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is unfair. a crowd whose work demands more physical energy and

workers

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who have served their

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for a longer duration should be allowed to take early

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.