Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Studying abroad has an enormous impact on many aspects
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lives. Some people believe that it might have a significant impact in the future, while others are convicted that there is no dissimilarity between
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and abroad education. While I agree that being educated out of the
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country could be more effective than
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. There
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number of reasons why studying abroad can be a powerful tool for every student.
First
and foremost, every person can expand their network while studying overseas.
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, every person probably will try to make friends from various countries.
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, if someone travels to the country where his friends are, that person will be safer. Since
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friends could give real advice rather than the Internet.
As a result
, the network helps every time and everywhere.
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, everyone has a chance to learn from each other numerous cultural features which improve students' adaptation in any place.
In other words
, people can be more flexible.
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, most people work around the world,
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of them go back
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. Since
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working and travelling at the same time I think it is more memorable than staying in
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country. In conclusion, studying abroad could give
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life experience.
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