Today family members do not eat meals together. Why does this happen? Is this a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the past, meals were considered a precious moment for all the family members, but in the developing world today
this
fact has been reduced due to the tendency of
people
living in the house and they live separately inside the house. From my ,perspective
this
can be a negative development for the
children
as well as for the family lifestyle.
This
essay will
further
elaborate on the reasons for the issue mentioned above with examples.
To begin
with, each and every household has its own style of cooking with preferred flavours and other substances. If families get together and eat their meals at
one
table
their habitual repetition will be maintained constantly, but if
this
breakdown, where
one
person in the family has a different time schedule for eating ,eventually the
people
in the family might suffer from the negative consequences of bad eating routines in the household. As a
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this
will lead to falling in the bond between the
parents
, grandparents and
children
.
For example
, in the present
day
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parents
work day and night leaving their
children
with educators or servants,
hence
they want to lead a luxurious life, but the family connection with loved ones is falling apart from them since they don't have enough time to eat at
one
table
.
On the other hand
, gathering around a
table
for meals is a way, where
people
get connected to each other, they discuss their problems and
also
the solutions are within the family members, in other ,words
people
release their stress by talking to each other.
However
today
this
process is not maintained in a family,
hence
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children
and
parents
and other members lead to depression at a very early stage of life. They have no
one
to share their feelings with and empathise with them when they are facing hurdles in life.
For example
, if you live with your
parents
it's easy to share your daily activities and your feelings, as they give you support. To sum up, eating together plays a crucial role in developing mental and social well-being.
Thus
, gathering around a
table
for at least
one
meal per day should be a regular habit for
people
.
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