It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. What do you think is the reason for the growth in juvenile crime? What are some solutions?
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this
modern era, some people often Linking Words
thought
that the violence in social Wrong verb form
think
media
has been increasing in juvenile crime. Use synonyms
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be examined
the causes of the increase in juvenile crime and Wrong verb form
examine
provided
some solutions in detail.
On the one hand, social Wrong verb form
provide
media
are Use synonyms
easier
accessible than in the old days Rephrase
more easily
namely
the world is spinning faster than before, especially the technology Rephrase
apply
such
as the internet on computers and mobile phonesLinking Words
as well
. Rephrase
apply
Last
but not least, online Linking Words
games
are able to interact with others even though they do not know each other. Use synonyms
For example
, there are many children who play online Linking Words
games
for entertainment and Use synonyms
introduction
themselves to friends in online Replace the word
introduce
games
, the disadvantage aspect is the youngsters truly trust them. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there are many types of people Linking Words
such
as the great ones and the worst ones Linking Words
such
as the crooks who will use other pictures Linking Words
for cheating
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to cheat
them
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gathering
outside and Wrong verb form
gather
doing
bad things.
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do
On the other hand
, some Linking Words
parents
should limit the time spent on social Use synonyms
media
. Use synonyms
For instance
, some families have rules about how many times to use mobile phones Linking Words
for protecting
their children from social addiction until the result is bad. Change preposition
to protect
In addition
, the Linking Words
parents
often teach them to avoid and protect themselves from strangers who are known on the internet. Use synonyms
For example
, my Linking Words
parents
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teach
me to be aware of the people known on Facebook because there are various murders that kill teenagers on the news because it has occurred on social Wrong verb form
taught
media
. Use synonyms
As a result
, it made the youth will protect themselves from strangers.
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To conclude
, it can be seen that the causes of teenage crimes Linking Words
occurred
on social Wrong verb form
occur
media
or online Use synonyms
games
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, there are some possible solutions Linking Words
such
as teaching from their Linking Words
parents
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and
protecting themselves and Correct word choice
apply
also
learning from the news.Linking Words
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