You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practice in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: • describe what the group does • explain why the group is good for the community • suggest alternative days and times for practice

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Dear Manager, I am writing

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letter on behalf of my beloved group called ABC & Co who use to perform mesmerizing musical activities in the local community hall. As you know, we are doing spectacular

performances

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twice a week along with a few training classes for whoever wants to learn the music and how to play the keyboard too. Having said that, these

performances

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are paramount and much needed by our local communities as they are educated by our magical activities all the way. In fact, we are fascinated to motivate them to know about the importance of education and how to secure our climate with minimal cost despite huge advertisements and online promotions in the other hand.

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, I strongly suggest a few alternatives to do practices over the weekends.

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, we can avoid a conflict with our phenomenal

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you guys will help indirectly our people as we are going to do

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because of you only.

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, you can do it every day after 8PM as we wrap up the show at 7:30PM and I am sure that

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will help to have a win-win situation. Should you have any questions about the suggestion and

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, please do not hesitate to ask back and we glad to answer them soon. I look forward to hearing your comments on new proposals and suggestions. Hope I will hear very soon. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

lakshma999Sat Oct 22 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

237 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

ensemble
rehearsal
community engagement
cultural enrichment
public performances
diversity
inclusivity
musical education
alternative arrangements
schedule compatibility

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