You stayed in a hotel and forgot some of your belongings there. Write to the manager: • Explaining your situation • Describe what you left behind • What do you want them to do about it. Write at least 150 words You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows Dear….

Dear Sir, My name is Simeon Agbanoma and I am one of the tourists who stayed in your prestigious hotel during the
last
summer break. I am writing to notify you about some of my belongings which I forgot during my stay. I realized there was a missing
box
in my luggage when I arrived in Nigeria
last
night.
Although
I kept
this
particular
box
in the inner closet of my room. The staff who took my belongings into the trunk of the truck that dropped me off at the airport told me my luggage
were
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complete in the car which is why I did not bother verifying. During my stay in your
hotel
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I did shop for my friends and family, some of which are items of clothing, bags, perfumes as well as other accessories which were quite pricey. Honestly, I worry about the safety of my belongings and I have nothing to gift any of my folks due to
this
issue. I would be glad if you can help check the closet in room six, I am certain my
box
is still there if no one has occupied the room since I departed.
Further
, when the
box
is found, kindly help me send it to Lagos, Nigeria via DHL express freight to the billing address on my contact information and let me know the cost implication so as to remit the payment immediately. I would we await your response and prompt action on the subject matter. Yours faithfully, Simeon Agbanoma
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