You stayed in a hotel and forgot some of your belongings there. Write to the manager: • Explaining your situation • Describe what you left behind • What do you want them to do about it. Write at least 150 words You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows Dear….

#hotel #belongings #manager #situation #addresses #dear…

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Dear Sir, My name is Simeon Agbanoma and I am one of the tourists who stayed in your prestigious hotel during the

last

summer break. I am writing to notify you about some of my belongings which I forgot during my stay. I realized there was a missing

box

in my luggage when I arrived in Nigeria

last

night.

Although

I kept

this

particular

box

in the inner closet of my room. The staff who took my belongings into the trunk of the truck that dropped me off at the airport told me my luggage

were

Change the verb form

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complete in the car which is why I did not bother verifying. During my stay in your

hotel

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I did shop for my friends and family, some of which are items of clothing, bags, perfumes as well as other accessories which were quite pricey. Honestly, I worry about the safety of my belongings and I have nothing to gift any of my folks due to

this

issue. I would be glad if you can help check the closet in room six, I am certain my

box

is still there if no one has occupied the room since I departed.

Further

, when the

box

is found, kindly help me send it to Lagos, Nigeria via DHL express freight to the billing address on my contact information and let me know the cost implication so as to remit the payment immediately. I would we await your response and prompt action on the subject matter. Yours faithfully, Simeon Agbanoma

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

252 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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