Today, some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of female and male in every subject. Others believe that this is an unacceptable policy. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, a portion of people

think

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that universities should accept equal numbers of female and male

students

in every

subject

. But the others do not agree with

this

assessment. Both of these do have their own points and are valid in certain

aspect

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. An equal number of

students

in every

subject

could theoretically

brings

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many noticeable changes in the way that people think.

First

and foremost,

this

could promote

gender

equalities

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.

Gender

equalities mean that both genders are given equal opportunities to pursue their dreams.

Thus

, giving them equal chance at getting a job.

For instance

, some jobs are thought to be for men and men only, but by applying the rule of accepting

equal

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number of males and females, that problem will disappear. Another good that

this

rule does is breaking

the

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social taboos,

for

example

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some think that one

gender

cannot or should not study

in

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a

subject

that the opposite

gender

is already good at.

In contrast

to

this

idea, some thinks

otherwise

, they believe that it is an unacceptable

policy

. They may consider

this

policy

unfair because it disregarded the

students

' freedom to choose what they want to do. If

an

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university normally

accept

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1000

students

per

subject

, after applying the mentioned

policy

, the chance of getting

in

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the

subject

is halved. So the ones who are truly passionate about the

subject

have to switch their major. Another

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problem

prooblem

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problem

that the idea create is unemployment. In

theory

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it should give both genders equal opportunities to get a job but

this

does not apply to real life. As a matter of fact, it does quite the opposite. It is true that they study the same

subject

but companies usually prefer one

gender

over the other for certain positions,

thus

create

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an

abundant

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of unemployed and

this

could

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lead

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lea

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lead

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to an increase in unemployment. All in all, the

policy

seems to be amazing in theory but applying it to the world could create more problems than it can solve.