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Nowadays, a lot of people are able to do their work from home discuss the advantage and disadvantages of this development

#people #work #home #advantage #development
The given line graph provides the population rate of
people
 who use the
internet
 in three distinct countries; the
USA
, Canada, and Mexico in the
year
 between 1999 and 2009. Overall, it is readily apparent that
internet
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 is gaining
its
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popularity
populority
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popularity
 over the decades among the three different countries.
Initially
, in the
first
year
, 1999,
internet
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 was not a prevalent method for
people
 to use, having the lowest percentage in all three countries. Among them,
USA
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 had slightly more
people
 who used the
internet
. While
the
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 number of
americans
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 started to get interested in
internet
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, there was a
dramastic
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dramatic
 influence
to
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 the Canadians,
which
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 the using
internet
 became hugely popular in the
year
 2003. From that period, the population rate in
Cananda
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Canada
 overtook the
USA
, and steadily grew reaching the highest point in the final
year
.
In addition
 to the
USA
 and Canada,
the
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internet
 use became more popular as well in Mexico throughout the period.
However
,
internet
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 could not attract a lot of
people
 in
this
 country compared to the other two. The ratio of the population started almost from the bottom end. But the country soon witnessed a fairly drastic increase from the
year
 2001 to 2005,
however
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 it was still only to the point where the
USA
 started from.
Furthermore
, the percentage of
the
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internet
 users constantly increased till the end of the
year
.
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