it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this discitncion. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opintion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Parents are responsible to raise their

children

properly and teach them moral values. Some people argue that punishment -

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approach can be a suitable

way

to educate

children

. To my

way

of thinking, some specific kinds of

punishments

are constructive and helpful in teaching

children

good or bad behaviours. There are some explicit reasons that support the idea that constructive punishment is a good

way

to guide

children

regarding either virtues or vices.

First

and foremost,

children

come to the realisation that they have made

mistakes

;

therefore

, they are

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their flaws and have to amend their

mistakes

. It provides a

way

for

children

to get lessons from their

mistakes

and inappropriate behaviour. By punishing them, they have a great opportunity to cut out their rude manner and try to modify themselves. Despite the fact that

punishments

can help parents to make their rebellious

children

be obedient, every

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are not proper. It is needless to say that physical punishment belongs to so many decades ago and cannot be acceptable and reasonable. Undeniably, physical

punishments

are against

children

’s

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.

Moreover

, they have converse effects on

children

. To be more exact,

children

who are exposed to receive physical penalties not only correct their

mistakes

but

also

become more stubborn and savage.

Hence

, alternative ways should be taken into consideration

such

as talking with

children

and attempting to convince them about their

mistakes

. In conclusion,

punishments

can be a

way

to teach

children

values to some extent. Physical

punishments

will lead to

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adverse effects on

children

instead

of being helpful.

As a

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other

way

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possibles should be considered

such

as talking to

children

about their

mistakes

and assisting them to figure out a

way

to improve their flaws.