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Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Through the past
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years, the
ability
 to read and write had an incredible development, they became important to
people
,
these
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abilities
 allowed
people
 to
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communicate
comunicate
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communicate
, but, were they in the past more important than now?
To begin
 with, the
ability
 to write was very useful in the past, because
people
 used to write letters to their friends and family,
secondly
, they used
this
ability
 to write news for the newspaper. The
ability
 to read was as important as the
ability
 to write,
people
 could understand letters, the newspaper and more.
Also
, with the
ability
 to write,
people
 could work, an example of
this
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 students,
they
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 needed both of them to make their homework or an essay, they wrote their essays and after that, they read their essays to correct their mistakes.
On the other hand
,
people
 still
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 these
abilities
, humans need them to do their work,
such
 as students, they have to do expositions, essays or an investigation. Adults use these
abilities
, too. They do
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 in their jobs, reports and
also
 letters. To do all these things, they must know how to read. All
the
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 things considered, we can say that these
abilities
 were important in the past until now, because with them,
people
 can
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communicate
comunicate
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communicate
 and
also
 work.
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