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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

#minutes #neighbours #noise #house #apologise #action
Dear Ahmed, Just
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 want to clarify the reason
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 the noise which you are complaining about from my flat, as you know recently we
all
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 in
quarntine
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quarantine
 due to covid-19, so all my
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children
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childrens
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children
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sitting
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siting
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in
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the
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home and they
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can't
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 go
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outside
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out side
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 even
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schools
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 are closed.
In addition
 for the above reason, recently my wife
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delivered
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awesome
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 girl and she is always crying without any
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, so all
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 reasons made our flat totally noisy. I
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deeply
apoligise
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apologise
 regarding
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 issue and
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 sure
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 am feeling what exactly you feel and
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 know with
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 noise you can not go on with your daily tasks. Dear be sure
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 will take
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serious
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serious
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complain
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 as follow: 1- I will ensure all my
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children
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children
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 not sleep
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 day time to avoid late sleeping at night. 2- I will inform my wife to keep the new baby
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 the farther room from your flat. Warm regards,
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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