Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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ads in all the

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surrounding

serrounding

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surrounding

area even on the

phone

or

laptob

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laptop

and

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actually

actulally

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actually

we

cant

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stop ourselves from them, so

i

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really understand that the

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is totally planned

from

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the

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professional

profissional

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professional

people who

knows

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well how they can affect

on

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the

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people

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behaviors

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am

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totally

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with the

first

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opinion

option

opnion

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opinion

that saying that advertisements

encourages

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us to buy things that we really do not need. I know one of my

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friends

friend

freinde

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friends

cant

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can't

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control himself when he entered any mall to go to the

phone

shops to check the

last

update for the phones and

comparing

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between them and all the time his mind

busy

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with

the

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phone

updates and for

this

reason whenever he

open

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his

phone

, all the social media, youtube and the browsers showing him the

phone

ads and almost his salary gone for

purshasing

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purchasing

the

phone

accessories and new phones.

In addition

, as a personal experience before when

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got the

Covid

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i

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spend 14 days

in

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home and

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calculate all my expenses in those 14 days you can not imagine that the total amount for these 14 days was more than 2

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months

monthes

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months

expenses

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of expenses

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due to the ads in the online website, actually non of these things is important for me and even not improved my life just the offers took my attention and the fake discount which they

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for example

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purshased

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purchased

a new

vacume

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vacuum

showing the original price was 150$ and after the discount 49$ only but after the completion of my quarantine

i

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went to the original shop for the

vacum

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vacuum

brand to buy the spare brush and

i

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found the original price is 55$. Same

this

fake discounts

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sometimes

somtimes

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sometimes

affect

on

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apply

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the

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people

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people's

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disscion

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discussion

dissection

.