You are going to another country to study.You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying,so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter * give details of your study plans * explain why you want to get a part-time job * suggest how your friend could help you find a job Write 150 letters.

Dear Sam, How are you doing? It's been a year and a half since I
last
visited you, trust you and your family doing well. I have some piece of exciting news to share with you. I have obtained my student visa to study for my master's of nursing in Australia. It is awesome news,isn't it? I have to be in Adelaide the
first
week of July.
However
, I need your support to sort out my initial steps, as I do not have a clear idea about the things that I have to do as soon as I landed there.
Hence
, I am sharing my study plan with you so that you can have visibility in terms of my schedule. I have lectures every day 9am - 4pm at the University of Adelaide and I will be free on weekdays after 6pm and entire days at weekends.
This
will be the plan for the
first
semester.
Also
note,
this
timetable might change in the
second
semester. Finding a job is paramount important to cover my usual expenses, as you know I do not like to become a burden to my family
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since they help to cover my major expenses which is the university fee and my visa fees. It would be great if you could reach out to your previous employers to see whether they could offer me a part-time opportunity to cover my means,
also
be beneficial if you can give a positive recommendation on my Linkedin profile which other way helpful for recruiters. I will not be taking your time any more, let's meet up
next
month. I have a bunch of stories to shower you with. See you soon, Thanking you Maya.
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